Creative Writing

Home alone

"Wake up, Steve. We are leaving." Steve opened his eyes and looked at his mother and his father. "We have to go right now," his mother went on. "We will miss the plane. I will miss you," with that word she went out of the front door with his father. He was alone. "There's nothing to do except to sleep," he said and went to sleep. After a few hour later Steve woke up. It was dark and raining hard. He was hungry so he got out of bed and made himself some breakfast and went to sleep about at 2:00. Steve woke up again and ate some lunch and went to his friend's house. When he was walking he saw a old doll. He picked the doll up and looked at it closely. It had an evil smile and he's eyes were gray and pale. He took the doll home and put it on the carpet and went to his friend's house. When it was 7:00 he returned to his home and went to his bed but he could not get to sleep so at 12:10 he went down to get a glass of water but he noticed something strange. The doll was gone from the carpet. Just then he heard a sound coming from the kitchen. He tiptoed to the kitchen door and saw the doll holding a big knife and he was staring at Steve.

 

Steve ran as fast as he could. When he looked behind he saw the doll chasing Steve. He ran into a bedroom and locked the door. For a second it was quiet. Steve saw the door handle rattling. Steve ran and went under the bed. There was a flash of thunder and Steve heard the blade of the knife slashing the door. All night he heard that slashing sound and he was shaking all the time. Finally morning came and as the sun came up the slashing stopped at once and there was a clunking noise.

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MOVIE REVIEW (the wizard of oz)

THE WIZARD OF OZ

I watched this fantasy movie called  The Wizard of Oz. This movie was about a girl named Dorothy she was living in Kansas but nobody cared about her so she ran away but she ran into a twister and she ended up killing the wicked witch of the west with a house in Munchkin land this land was bright and cheer full, but Dorothy wanted to go home just than Gllinda the with witch said to meet the wizard of Oz so she went to the emerald city witch bright and cheer full like Munchkin land but Oz said to kill the wicked witch of the west. So Dorothy melted the wicked witch of the west and then she found out that Oz was not real, but Oz said he would take her home with with his hot air balloon but Toto Dorothy's dog got away so Dorothy chased Toto because of that she missed the hot air balloon.when she was crying Gllinda the white witch came and told her to tap her shoes than she got to home. That is the story. I did not like the story because I already know the story and It was sort of boring and I don't think the witch's face should be green. I think we can learn that if you work hard every thing will go well.